Today, Miss Abena handed back our essay,
"How Does Mary Shelley add atmosphere to the start of Chapter
5?" When I got back my essay it was relatively good, just a few areas to
improve on. In my opinion, I feel that these sections are the sections that
need the most improvement"
*Stick straight to the point, don't waffle
* Punctuation and spelling
* Understand suitable use of when to use present
and past tense
Miss Abena asked us to make an improvement mat
and we can easily reference mistakes, Also, if any sections of the text was
good, we should post in on the blog. I feel that my essay writing needs
improvements from the usual government school standards, and by perhaps reading
other essays and learning from past mistakes, I can improve on this! Also,
asking Miss Abena on how to effectively use the improvement mat would
be useful also
Wi Kiat
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