Monday, February 6, 2012

Improvements Chapter 5 Essay (2/12/11)


Mary Shelley adds a sense of horror to Chapter 5
Thesis Statement: -It is suggested that should get straight to the point in the statement
                           
  - “ Describe Frankenstein in a grotesque manner” NO!
                              “ by describing Frankenstein in a grotesque manner” YES!
    Check verb endings (e,es,ing)
Paragraph 1: Avoid waffling (saying something unrelevant)
                      A good intro would be like a sneak preview of what we are going to say
Paragraph 2: :Extinguished Light
    Check adjective endings
Paragraph 3: “Disgust or even fear in the reader, to witness” (Unnecessary (,)
     
Paragraph 4: Correctly use it’s and its
  It’s: It is
  Its: Belonging to
  When writing literary essays, use present tense
Paragraph 5: Unnecessary punctuation (“ “)
Ending Paragraph: Don’y use repeated words
  An ending paragraph summarizes what you have explained in the text

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